Sinking, drowning, grasping

As I am sinking,

as I slowly drown,

I am grasping,

making no sound,

suffocating as I go under,

things are going dark

will there come a saviour

to rescue me

and save the day

It’s gone beyond

me saving myself

I tried so hard but floundered

and now I need some help

or it’s all over

and all good things

will come to an end.

Via: daily Prompt: Grasp

4 responses to “Sinking, drowning, grasping”

  1. Not every effort ends in a success, not everygood thing lasts. And you brought out the emotions so well. Amazing work! 🙂 🙂

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    1. Thank you again, I am glad you enjoyed it.

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  2. You’ve done an amazing job with this… Sinking, downing – such powerful emotions, described so well… X

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    1. Thank you very much for your kind words

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