The loss of you is great in me

Between Saturn and Jupiter

I seemed to have lost you,

Between the stars and the sea

You list your belief in me,

Now I feel the pain

Resonating across the galaxies,

My heart’s torn now I am forlorn

Remembering how you disappeared from me,

Now I travel all alone

Now I feel I’ve been abandoned,

I feel the loss of a thousand years

Bleeding out from a waterfall of tears,

How could this have happened to us

We used ride on a light waves cusp,

But now I glide across cosmic tides

With sad songs playing sorrowfully through my mind.

6 responses to “The loss of you is great in me”

  1. This is so deeply sad. Beautifully written 💙💙

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    1. Thanks very much 💝🙏 Faux

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  2. So, so, so beautiful, faux 😍😍 just perfect! ♥️👏🏽🙏🏽

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    1. Thank you very much, I am really glad you enjoyed it 🙏 Faux

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  3. Nicely described, it’s beautiful.

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    1. Thanks very much for reading and appreciating my friend 💖🙏

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