fauxcroft

The ghost of me

The ghost of me

Won’t set me free,

As winter sets in

I see the landscape freeze,

You were my love

We were the destiny,

Into the night

We echo through time,

You are such a mystery

We cry icicle tears

That leave us so blind,

Still my heart breaks

And it’s hard to take,

The ghost of me

Collides in the cosmic wake,

Of a sad winter’s day,

As my life fades.

fauxcroft
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8 responses to “The ghost of me”

  1. Shanyu avatar
    Shanyu

    Again, a jewel man. Interesting imagery and the drop in the end? Powerful. Icicle tears had to be my favourite term of the poem. That is so thought provoking. I would love to have it one of my own poems if you don’t mind. I hope you are doing well. Peace ✌️
    Admiringly,
    Shanyu

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  2. Endo Warrior avatar
    Endo Warrior

    I really like this poem, then again I loved your last ghost one too ❤️

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  3. SecretThoughts avatar
    SecretThoughts

    So moving Faux, it’s easy to connect to these beautifully crafted words.

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    1. fauxcroft avatar
      fauxcroft

      Thanks very much my friend, I really appreciate your kind words 🌟🙏 Faux

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  4. Lia avatar
    Lia

    I love this and your other ghost poem as well. “You are such a mystery” 🌟🌖

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    1. fauxcroft avatar
      fauxcroft

      Thank you very much, I am truly glad you enjoyed it 💛🌟🙏 Faux

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  5. lawrenceez avatar
    lawrenceez

    It’s really beautifully written.

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    1. fauxcroft avatar
      fauxcroft

      Thanks very much for reading and appreciating my friend 🌟🙏 Faux

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