Don’t give up

The tension between us is palpable

I can feel it in the air,

It’s not like we don’t really care

Things have just become mundane,

And our lives are full of stress

And sometimes we both feel we being treated as second best,

Maybe things have got stale

And we taking each other for granted,

But that’s no reason that I see for us parting

Maybe we should both try something kind of different,

Maybe we should find something more exciting

Then comeback and share our adventures with one another,

It could be that we both feel somehow smothered,

It could be we need a new interest

Or something more forbidden,

It seems lately that our passions we have hidden,

But we owe to each other and we owe it to ourselves

To try and make this work,

Rather than just give up on it

This love we once shared, it was exquisite,

So let’s work away how to try and fix this.

13 responses to “Don’t give up”

  1. I love this….too bad men just wont communicate

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  2. This hit dangerously close to home, my friend! I felt every line. Fantastic!

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    1. Thanks, I am glad it resonated with you 🙏 Faux

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    wardah

    Beautiful!!

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  4. Bravo – j’aime vraiment beaucoup celui-ci. 🙂

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    1. Thanks very much my friend 🙏 Faux

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  5. Brilliantly written.

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    1. Thanks very much, I am humbled by your kind words 💛🙏 Faux

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  6. Amazing one 👏🏻👏🏻

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    1. Thanks very much for reading and appreciating my friend 🙏 Faux

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  7. Lovely. Try and fix it. 😉

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    1. Always worth the effort 💛🙏 Faux

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      1. Indeed. 🙂

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