Back wash slam

Back slash

Back wash

From a nobody,

Critiquing others work

That you find shoddy,

Lacking perspicaciousness

You sit in righteous judgement,

Hunched over your keyboard

Typing vitriolic shit,

Lacking any kind  literary competence

Your house isn’t built of brick,

It’s a glasshouse that can be shattered

Like any other poets dreams,

The shit you write is not constructive

It’s created just to be mean,

But it actually highlights the problem

Some people have in life,

With constructing any empathy

Or real love or any light,

Your judgment don’t mean anything

Because when you slam they shut down the mic,

Because in truth nobody’s poetry

Or words are ever shite,

They are unique and true to them

And come from deep within,

It’s actually funny just to know

That in your mind they’re living,

And doing it rent free,

Your judgement is just a reflection of

An non-artistic fart you see,

And it’s generated from the rectum

Of some keyboard warriors fat arse.

5 responses to “Back wash slam”

  1. Haha! This is brilliant! 😁
    Nice work my friend 👍🖤

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    1. Thanks very much for reading and enjoying friend 🙏 Faux

      Liked by 1 person

      1. You’re always welcome my friend 🖤

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    henhouselady

    I chuckled when I read this. Everyone is a critic. Keep posting. I enjoy your work.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thanks very much, you’re so right 🙏 Faux

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