Give me control 

Could you open up to me

Could you yield you soul completely

Surrender yourself to my control

Allow me know all that you know

And fill your heart with undiluted passion

Engorge your being until it spasms

Fill your very entity

With everything you will ever need.

Will you open up to me body and soul

Allow me to master you and then console

You for your life as it’s been to now

For lacking purpose somehow.

I can offer you light

I can offer you love

I can offer you meaning

And offer you truth

I can consume you whole 

And eat your pain away

If you open up to me

In every single way.

4 responses to “Give me control ”

  1. No it’s fine. We all go through stuff and often that’s what inspires us or makes us seem inspirational to others. If you haven’t experienced all aspects of life it is hard to relate to things. I thank you for your kind words and thoughts. I thank you for making the connection.

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      snehdoshi

      I just saw this. Was sad from 1st June that i must have hurt you. Did not even like any of your post , thought i would have disturbed. But i read them all. Silly me even spoke to a friend about the fact that i might have hurt you. I don’t know why did i never get any notification for your reply. Ill just go like the post i read.

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    snehdoshi

    Hey, i read some post. I guess you deleted it. I just wanted to tell you something that j never thought someone that inspires me so much faces the same. I faced the same a year ago. Did not leave home fr 6 months. But at the end its only me who suffered. Yes the person might be important that did it. But at what cost. If there is no ‘you’ the person really wouldn’t matter. Its no kind of sympathy. I just fucking respect and care for you a lot. Even if i don’t know where you live and who you are. But connections like that only matter and such connections don’t listen to people that keep bitching around.

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      snehdoshi

      And sorry if you really did not like the interference . U may delete the comment. Cause i cant do that.

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