Quiver

Body aches

Squirms and shakes

Muscles vibrate

Desires create

A sensual state

That elongates

And then migrates

To a erogenous place

Contorts the face

And leaves a feeling

Of bliss and grace

That’s difficult

To reiterate

But obliterates

Our conscious state of mind.

6 responses to “Quiver”

  1. […] here is Quiver; don’t be shy- give it a […]

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    1. Thank you for reblogging and your kind words.

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  2. I love that the tempo gives it a building effect, which is rather apt. It’s a very effective poem!
    I have a writer of the week section of my blog, would it be ok if I featured this poem on Friday?

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    1. Absolutely fine. I would be honored. Thank you

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  3. Well versed. It is truly astonishing how you manage to play with all those motives. It brings in the originality to your poems and creative touch from your personality. 😀 Good work Sergeant Fauxcroft. 😀

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    1. Thank you for your kind words

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