fauxcroft

2 responses to “In search of doorways”

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   gilian

   Sep 7, 2018

   A place of love is what you seek,
   To a place that everyone knows of but rarely sees,
   So you can free yourself and fly,
   You search for doorways it is not in your mind.

   Far away from this place and time
   Heading off to the one true light
   Because, yes, that’s the one thing that is right

   To step out of life you say is what you want
   an open doorway, you just need a way out
   For you cannot bear what is before you
   A world immune to love
   Little ones suffer
   The old messes up
   Our earth destroyed by corporations who want more
   You just can’t, you just can’t take the suffering anymore.
   You you look for a doorway to get out
   Instead of staying to help someone out

   A little life you change
   Can make a difference
   Your voice, your story
   Can change every garbage to glory

   God’s love for you and me
   He showed by sending Jesus
   As the way, the truth and the life
   So that through this door way
   Everyone who believes will be saved
   An eternity he prepared for every man
   The sufferings here on earth
   Is nothing compared to the rest that awaits in his loving arms.

   Justice up there will be served for all those who did wrong
   Don’t worry, all these troublemakers will have a place of their own
   The little children will also have a place forever
   That is nothing compared to the years of suffering which will not last forever

   So, rest now
   And don’t give up
   Spread the love
   That is enough

   (I just tried playing with your poem from end to top. 😂 I enjoyed it. ) well written and full of emotions by the way. 👍🏻

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      fauxcroft

      Sep 8, 2018

      Thank you very much for reading and appreciating. I love how you played with it. 🙂

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